Paper 2 at a glance
AQA 8700 Paper 2 is 105 minutes, 80 marks:
| Question | Task | Marks | What is really being tested |
|---|---|---|---|
| Q1 | Choose four true statements | 4 | Accurate retrieval from Source A |
| Q2 | Summary of differences between Source A and Source B | 8 | Inference and synthesis |
| Q3 | Analyse language in Source B | 12 | How language shapes viewpoint |
| Q4 | Compare writers’ perspectives and methods | 16 | Comparison of ideas and how they are conveyed |
| Q5 | Viewpoint writing in a given form | 40 | AO5 content/organisation 24 + AO6 technical accuracy 16 |
A typical paper uses two linked non-fiction sources, usually one modern and one nineteenth-century.
Working score targets
These are paper targets, not official boundaries:
| Overall target | Approx Paper 2 target /80 |
|---|---|
| Grade 9-safe pace | 64+ |
| Grade 7 pace | 51–52 |
| Grade 5 pace | 42–43 |
| Grade 4 pace | 38 |
A strong split for grade 9 pace is roughly:
- Reading: 30/40
- Writing: 34/40
Minute-by-minute timing plan
Use a strict 60/45 split: 60 minutes for Section A, 45 minutes for Section B.
| Time | Action |
|---|---|
| 0–8 min | Read both sources. Underline viewpoints, tone shifts, and any obvious similarities/differences. |
| 8–12 min | Q1 |
| 12–22 min | Q2 |
| 22–37 min | Q3 |
| 37–57 min | Q4 |
| 57–62 min | Plan Q5 |
| 62–100 min | Write Q5 |
| 100–105 min | Proofread Q5 and check any missed comparison in Q4 if needed |
Q1: four true statements
Exact format
You get eight statements about Source A. Exactly four are true.
Fastest reliable method
- Read the specified lines only.
- Test each statement against the text.
- Mark:
- T if the wording is clearly supported
- F if one key word is wrong
- ? if unsure
- Choose only the four certain truths.
What traps look like
Wrong answers usually:
- twist one detail: early morning becomes late morning
- turn an inference into a certainty
- swap who did what
- use a near-synonym that changes meaning
Tactical rule
For Q1, do not interpret. This is not the place to be clever.
Q2: summary of differences
What the examiner wants
An inference-led comparison of the specified difference between the two sources.
This is not language analysis. You are summarising what is different, using evidence from both texts.
Best structure for 8 marks
Write 3 short comparative paragraphs.
Use this pattern each time:
- State one clear difference.
- Support from Source A.
- Support from Source B.
- Explain what we can infer.
Example frame:
- One difference is that Source A presents ___ as ___, whereas Source B presents it as ___. In Source A, ... This suggests ... By contrast, in Source B, ... implying ...
How much evidence?
- Short quotations or precise references
- Usually 2–3 developed differences is enough
- Keep both texts in every paragraph
Common reasons answers stall at 4/8
- treating the texts separately
- spotting obvious details but not inferring attitudes or experience
- analysing words instead of summarising differences
- writing only one developed point
Q3: language analysis on non-fiction
Exact task
You analyse how the writer in Source B uses language in the specified section.
Because this is non-fiction, strong answers focus on how language conveys:
- attitude
- judgement
- intensity
- persuasion
- disdain, admiration, fear, excitement, frustration
Fastest reliable method
Pick three methods or quotations that clearly shape the reader’s view.
Good choices in non-fiction:
- loaded adjectives and verbs
- vivid comparisons or imagery
- lists and accumulation
- direct address
- rhetorical questions
- hyperbole
- contrast
- sentence forms that sharpen tone
Paragraph model
Use 3 analytical paragraphs:
- idea about effect
- short embedded quotation
- zoom in on key word/phrase
- link to writer’s viewpoint
Example pattern:
- *The writer presents the journey as humiliating through the verb “___”, which suggests ___. This makes the experience seem ___ and positions the reader to ___. *
Level targets
| Level | Marks | What it looks like |
|---|---|---|
| Level 4 | 10–12 | Perceptive, detailed analysis; effects linked closely to viewpoint |
| Level 3 | 7–9 | Clear explanation with relevant quotations |
| Level 2 | 4–6 | Some comment, often feature-spotting or generic effects |
| Level 1 | 1–3 | Simple points with little analysis |
What lifts you into Level 4
- analysing the connotations of precise words
- linking methods to the writer’s overall perspective
- avoiding stock phrases like “this makes the reader want to read on”
Q4: compare perspectives and how they are conveyed
This is the hinge question
Q4 is worth 16 marks and decides whether your reading mark is average or top-band.
You must compare:
- the writers’ ideas/perspectives, and
- how they convey them.
Best structure: comparative all the way through
Write 4 comparative paragraphs, not “Source A then Source B”.
Use this pattern:
- comparative point
- Source A evidence + method + effect
- Source B evidence + method + effect
- sentence of judgement
Example opener:
- Both writers present travel as difficult, but Source A treats it as an inconvenience while Source B portrays it as a genuine ordeal.
What to compare
Strong comparison usually covers:
- overall attitude
- tone
- what each writer values or criticises
- how each tries to shape the reader’s response
- methods: diction, anecdote, imagery, contrast, sentence patterns, direct address
Level targets
| Level | Marks | What it looks like |
|---|---|---|
| Level 4 | 13–16 | Perceptive comparison; detailed links between ideas and methods |
| Level 3 | 9–12 | Clear, relevant comparison across both texts |
| Level 2 | 5–8 | Some comparison, but often separate or thin |
| Level 1 | 1–4 | Simple comments; little method; little real comparison |
The fastest reliable plan
Before writing, jot this mini-grid:
| Comparison point | Source A | Source B |
|---|---|---|
| Attitude to topic | ||
| Tone | ||
| Method | ||
| Reader effect |
Then turn each row into a paragraph.
Q5: viewpoint writing in the right form
Marking reality
Q5 is 40 marks:
- AO5: 24 for ideas, organisation, tone, register, form
- AO6: 16 for technical accuracy
The safest high-mark structure
Spend 5 minutes planning:
- your position in one sentence
- 3 main arguments
- 1 counterargument to knock down or absorb
- final message
Then write:
- opening hook + clear thesis
- argument 1
- argument 2
- argument 3
- counterargument / concession
- conclusion with a strong final line
Form conventions that matter
| Form | Must do | Avoid |
|---|---|---|
| Article | Engaging heading; semi-formal; direct audience awareness | Fake newspaper layout obsession |
| Speech | Clear audience address; persuasive rhythm; signposting | Writing it like an essay with no audience |
| Letter | Clear viewpoint and suitable sign-off/register | Overlong addresses or irrelevant format detail |
| Essay | Logical argument; balanced reasoning | Sounding chatty or speech-like |
What gets 19–24 for AO5
- a clear, controlled line of argument
- deliberate paragraphing and sequencing
- matched register and form
- crafted rhetoric, not random devices
What gets 13–16 for AO6
- secure punctuation
- varied sentence structures used accurately
- strong spelling of common and ambitious vocabulary
High-value techniques
Use a few, well:
- contrast: We praise convenience, yet ignore its cost.
- rule of three
- rhetorical question
- anecdote or brief scenario
- direct address
- periodic sentence for emphasis
The biggest traps on this paper
Trap 1: analysing language in Q2
Q2 is about differences in ideas/experience, not methods.
Trap 2: writing about structure in Q3
Q3 asks about language in a set section.
Trap 3: treating Q4 as two mini-essays
If paragraphs are split into “Source A” then “Source B”, comparison becomes thin.
Trap 4: wrong form in Q5
A speech must sound spoken. An article must sound public-facing. An essay must sound reasoned.
Trap 5: weak technical accuracy
Top ideas with shaky punctuation can lose too many AO6 marks.
Targeted drills that actually move marks
1. Q1 truth-test drill — 4 minutes
Take any paragraph and write eight statements: four true, four false by one-word twists. Train precision.
2. Q2 difference drill — 8 minutes
Read two short paragraphs on the same topic. Write three sentences, each beginning:
- One difference is...
Force yourself to include both texts every time.
3. Q3 zoom drill — 10 minutes
Pick three quotations from non-fiction. For each, write:
- word choice
- connotations
- what it reveals about viewpoint
Ban yourself from writing “this creates an image” unless you explain the image.
4. Q4 grid drill — 12 minutes
Fill in the four-row comparison grid before writing anything. This trains genuine synthesis.
5. Q5 skeleton drill — 15 minutes
Given a statement, make only the plan:
- thesis
- 3 arguments
- counterargument
- final line
This is the highest-value speed drill for Paper 2.
Final checklist for exam day
- Q1: check every word of the statement
- Q2: differences, not language analysis
- Q3: three precise language points, well-developed
- Q4: compare throughout, not text-by-text
- Q5: clear stance, right form, accurate punctuation