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Planning, structure and cohesion
Writing: crafting creative and transactional texts · Lesson 1 of 9
Form, register and audience conventions 1 h of study
This unit is ≈41% of the GCSE English Lang, across 9 lessons.
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Strong planning and deliberate structure are what turn “good ideas” into high-mark writing. In the exam, this is tested mainly through AO5 in Section B on both papers: not just what you say, but how clearly, purposefully and cohesively you shape the whole text.
By the end you’ll be able to Plan a 45-minute response in about 5 minutes: purpose, audience, form, a controlling idea and a paragraph-by-paragraph shape Structure writing deliberately, with an engaging opening, development, a turning point or climax, and a satisfying or resonant ending (including cyclical structures) Use paragraphs of varied length for effect and link them with a range of cohesive devices and discourse markers Control the pace and flow of a whole text so that it reads as one coherent, fluently linked piece What the exam asks
In AQA 8700, structure and cohesion matter in both writing tasks:
Paper 1, Section B: descriptive or narrative writingPaper 2, Section B: viewpoint/transactional writing in a specified form
Markers reward writing that:
matches purpose, audience and form
has a clear whole-text plan
is organised into logical, controlled paragraphs
uses links and transitions smoothly
creates effects through openings, shifts, climaxes, contrasts and endings
This sits mainly in AO5 : communication, organisation and adaptation of style. AO6 supports it, because accurate punctuation and sentence control make structure easier to follow.
Core ideas
Start with a 5-minute plan
A strong plan is short, not detailed. You are not writing notes to impress anyone; you are preventing drift.
Use this quick formula:
PAF + CI + 4-part shape \text{PAF + CI + 4-part shape} PAF + CI + 4-part shape Where:
PAF = Purpose, Audience, FormCI = Controlling Idea4-part shape = Opening, Development, Turn, Ending
Plan element What to decide Example Purpose entertain, describe, argue, persuade, advise persuade readers that phones should be banned in lessons Audience examiner, general readers, students, adults school community
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Form story, description, article, speech, letter speech
Controlling idea one sentence that keeps the writing focused convenience is not the same as necessity
Paragraph shape what each paragraph does problem → example → counterargument → conclusion
A good controlling idea stops the common problem of wandering into unrelated points or events .
Build the text, not just paragraphs High-mark writing feels designed. That means the whole piece has a visible journey.
A simple and effective structure for many tasks is:
Engaging opening – hook the reader fastDevelopment – build detail, argument or tensionTurning point / climax – a shift, challenge, reveal or strongest pointEnding – resolution, reflection, echo or call to action For Paper 1 creative writing, that might be:
calm setting
n- strange detail
sudden change
resonant final image
For Paper 2 viewpoint writing, that might be:
sharp opening position
reasons developed
opposing view acknowledged and answered
memorable conclusion
Use paragraphing deliberately Paragraphs are not just “where the page looks right”. Each paragraph should have a job.
Paragraph type Main job Best use Single-line / very short emphasis, shock, shift climax, punchline, sudden realisation Standard paragraph develop one clear point or stage most of the piece Longer developed paragraph explore a key moment or argument fully central scene or strongest idea
Varying paragraph length helps control pace :
short paragraphs = speed, drama, urgencylonger paragraphs = reflection, detail, explanation
Create cohesion with links, not repetition Cohesion means the writing flows as one connected piece.
You can create it through:
Discourse markers
Adding: furthermore, also, in additionShifting: meanwhile, later, at first, by contrastArguing: however, although, admittedly, thereforeConcluding: ultimately, in the end, above all
Lexical cohesion Repeat or vary key words from your controlling idea.
phone
screen
notification
device
constant connection
This keeps the piece unified without sounding repetitive.
Structural echoes Bring back an image, phrase or idea from the opening in the ending. This is a cyclical structure .
Opening: “The field looked empty.”
Ending: “Now the field was empty again, but not in the same way.”
That creates shape and completion.
Control pace and flow Pace is the speed at which the reader moves through the text.
Method Speeds up Slows down Sentence length short, direct sentences longer, layered sentences Paragraph length brief paragraphs developed paragraphs Detail selective action points expanded description/reflection Time movement jumps forward zooms in on one moment
For creative writing, the best pieces often zoom in at the key moment rather than rushing through a whole plot.
For transactional writing, pace improves when points are sequenced logically : strongest first, or from personal example to wider issue.
Worked examples
Paper 1 narrative: 5-minute plan
Task: Write a story about a moment when everything changed.
Step 1: PAF
Purpose = entertain
Audience = general reader/examiner
Form = narrative
Step 2: Controlling idea
One tiny decision can alter an ordinary day completely.
Step 3: 4-part shape
Paragraph 1: Ordinary bus journey home; calm, familiar details.
Paragraph 2: Narrator notices an unattended violin case on a seat.
Paragraph 3: Bus empties; narrator must decide whether to ignore it or act.
Paragraph 4: Opens case only enough to find contact details; owner returns in panic.
Paragraph 5: Ending echoes opening bus journey, but now the day feels changed.
Why this works
Clear opening, development, turning point and ending
Focuses on one event, not a whole life story
Final paragraph can be cyclical: same bus, changed perspective
Likely high-mark choice
Zoom in on the decision in Paragraph 3 with slower pace and shorter sentences.
Paper 1 description: shaping pace
Task: Describe a place that seems peaceful at first, but is not.
Weak shape: field → trees → sky → birds → suddenly scary
This is just a list with a last-minute twist.
Better shape:
Paragraph 1: Wide, calm overview
Paragraph 2: Closer sensory detail; one unsettling sign
Paragraph 3: Silence becomes noticeable; pace slows
Paragraph 4: Sudden movement/noise; very short paragraph
Paragraph 5: Ending returns to stillness, but now it feels threatening
Sample structural choices
Start broad, then narrow the focus
Delay the threat instead of announcing it early
Use a one-sentence paragraph for the shock moment: “Something moved in the hedge.”
End cyclically so the description feels complete
Why this scores well
The writing is organised around a clear emotional shift, so the reader experiences change rather than just receiving description.
Paper 2 speech: paragraph-by-paragraph structure
Task: Write a speech for your school arguing that competition is more harmful than helpful for young people.
5-minute plan
Purpose = persuade
Audience = students and teachers
Form = speech
Controlling idea = healthy ambition matters, but constant competition damages confidence and learning.
Paragraph shape
Direct address and clear stance: “We are told competition brings out the best in us. Often, it brings out the worst.”
Pressure and anxiety in school life
How competition can discourage those already struggling
Counterargument: competition can motivate; rebuttal = only when balanced and voluntary
Conclusion with call to action: value progress, not just ranking
Cohesive devices built in
“First” to introduce the first reason
“More importantly” to deepen the argument
“Some people will argue…” to signal counterargument
“So let us…” to move to the conclusion
Why this works
It sounds like a speech, stays on one line of argument, and moves logically rather than repeating the same point in different words.
Exam technique
Spend about 5 minutes planning the 40-mark task. This saves marks, not time.Choose the task you can shape clearly , not the one with the flashiest idea.Write a controlling idea sentence before you start. If a sentence or paragraph does not support it, cut it.Plan paragraph jobs, not full paragraphs. A 5-line plan is enough.For Paper 1 , think in terms of movement and shift : zoom in, reveal, contrast, climax, echo.
For Paper 2 , think in terms of argument sequence : claim, evidence/example, counterargument, conclusion.
If stuck, use this emergency structure:
Opening hook
Two developed middle paragraphs
Shift/counterpoint/climax
Ending with echo or final message
Leave 2 minutes to check paragraphing and links. Add a discourse marker only where the logic genuinely changes.
Common mistakes
Writing without a whole-text shape
Students often begin strongly, then drift. A powerful opening cannot rescue an unplanned middle.
Treating paragraph breaks randomly
New paragraph = new stage, focus, time shift, speaker move or argument step. Do not break only when the line looks long.
Using connectives as decoration
“Furthermore”, “however” and “moreover” do not create cohesion if the ideas themselves do not link logically.
Quick recap
Plan in about 5 minutes using Purpose, Audience, Form, Controlling Idea .
Shape the whole text: opening, development, turn/climax, ending .
Make each paragraph do a clear job.
Vary paragraph length to control pace and emphasis .
Use cohesion through logical links, repeated ideas, word patterns and echoes .
In creative writing, focus on a moment , not a crowded plot.
In transactional writing, organise points in a clear argument sequence .
End deliberately: cyclical endings are often effective because they make the piece feel complete.