Revising for organization, precision, and concision

By the end you’ll be able to

• Determine the most logical placement of a sentence or detail to improve the organization and progression of ideas in a paragraph or short passage.
• Evaluate whether a sentence, phrase, or detail should be added, retained, revised, or deleted to maintain focus and relevance.
• Revise wording to increase precision by selecting language that more exactly conveys the intended meaning, claim, or description.